Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work.
Our school-wide theme this year is 'In Our Backyard. Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho - there is no place like home.' Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work.
Hi Aneesa, My name is Jarvis from room 8, I like you writing post about people very high up on a tall building falling down in fright. Maybe next time ask a buddy to re-read your story to make sure it makes sence. Blog ya later Jarvis
Hi Jarvis, Aneesa here Thank you for replying on my blog and for the advise. I will re-read my work next time. Have you done any writing like this? Blog ya later
Hi Aneesa, My name is Jarvis from room 8, I like you writing post about people very high up on a tall building falling down in fright. Maybe next time ask a buddy to re-read your story to make sure it makes sence.
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Hi Jarvis, Aneesa here Thank you for replying on my blog and for the advise. I will re-read my work next time. Have you done any writing like this? Blog ya later
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